Haiku
My View of the World in 5/7/5 format


new olympic sport?

September 19 2006

i wrote this haiku
holding breath, underwater
in a swimming pool


Thought I would submit my own haiku inspired by my daily commute:

Fuck-wad on a bike
Get the hell out of my way
Before I kill you

By patrick on September 21 2006


I have another. Lets face it, Haikus are really just a cool Japanese invention that let us say anything we want and call it poetry!

Summer slowly dies
Grey skies weep their autumn cry
I need new wipers

By Patrick on September 21 2006


Patrick, that last is
a really well done haiku,
perfect in all ways.

By Travis on September 22 2006


Rowan starts daycare
How come other kids always
Have snot on their faces?

Rowan starts daycare
I want to quit my job now
and stay home with her

By Patrick on September 25 2006

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